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It comes and it goes. Apathy lies at the root of everything I don't write. Tragedy at the root of everything I do.

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Mon Nov 16, 2009, 11:23 AM
Okay, here's the beginning of a running list of things I'd like to see change on deviantART:

Scrolling text thumbs for literature thumbshare: If you have ever tried featuring lit or tried sifting through features, you know how annoying it is that Everything Looks the Same. Lit is naturally treated as second class on dA, and I don't think enough is being done to offset the obvious drawbacks of lit vs. visual art, mainly that it's a hell of a lot harder to know if you like lit than a picture. You usually know instantly with a picture; with lit, you really have to seek it out. I really like the scrolling text thumbs they implemented a few upgrades back. I've branched out a ton more in my lit-reading because a first sentence or line is all that is really needed to suck a person in. Sometimes it takes a few lines, so I know I'm missing some great stuff, but I'm not missing all of it anymore.

So, dA, please help us with making the scrolling text thumbs universal.

A friendship category for poetry: This is the biggest problem I run in to for submitting poetry. A lot of what I write is based in a deep, substantial love between friends. I'm often forced to either cheapen it and put it in romantic poetry or shove it in human nature, which I think defeats the purpose of having categories at all.

We really need a category revamp in general, but I know the friendship category is a common request.

•Speaking of categories, what about Creative Non-Fiction?: I've been putting all of my creative non-fiction into Fiction>Life Stories because it fits best.

People make entire careers on creative non-fiction. We could use a category for it.

A "You Cannot Favorite Without Commenting First" block: I love favorites as much as the next person, but it means nothing to me without the words of the reader. Even a "Wow, this was great!" is better than a simple :+fav:. I encourage critique. I have a premium account halfway so I can use the critique feature. But that's not the point. I joined this community because it was a community. I want to interact with other artists and readers. When I joined that wasn't a problem. Now I have to troll the forums to get some kind of human interaction here.

Give us the option to deny favorites without accompanying comments.

Allow "/" and "()" in deviation titles: More than just "/" and "()" but also ñ and é, etc. I'm guessing its a URL thing. You guys are genius coders and you can't figure out a system to automatically convert "/" to "-" and "ñ" to "n" in the URL? Not only is this limited, but it's extremely unfair to people who write in languages other than English. I wrote a Spanish haiku (odd choice, I know) and the title is "El verbo extrañar," but dA wouldn't let me have that title because of the unaccepted character. I was forced to title it "El verbo extranar," which is not the title.

Titles are extremely important and say a lot about the piece. Don't cheapen it. Give us the option to be true to the art.



This is what I've got for now. Once I find the right people to make suggestions to, suggest I will.

If you have anything to add, please comment! I'll add to the list as suggestions come in.


Suggested by ~Ailoura-aithe:
"how about a preview for poetry/lit before submission, like the preview author's comments? atm you have to submit and then edit the deviation until the lay-out's right (which can obviously be quite crucial to a poem). it's annoying and time-consuming. (also, this means that people can see it before it's sorted out)"

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:iconthe-mighty-kelp:
Hello, thank you for your comment on my essay. (Even though I had forgotten that DA was a public site... I was mainly uploading it for my friends to see. Silly me. =P) I just have a few comments:

"You've managed to entirely discount a person's ability to self edit based on the situation."
I didn't necessarily do that. I just didn't mention it. I didn't say people should not swear any time, anyway - you might remember I did say swearing had its own place - what I was trying to say was that the majority of people I've met that swear treat it as if it's not offensive. I'm glad to hear that you have the sense to not swear around people that would be offended if you did. But unfortunately, you are in the minority.

"Having a dirty mouth will do nothing to keep you from getting a job or any similar repercussion if you have enough common sense to self edit."
Exactly, duh. That's why I said "SWEARING RAMPANTLY," meaning NOT self-editing.

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:icontwister8138:
Not mentioning an important point is, in essence, a fallacy. I say this to help you with future essays of this nature. You always want to address the most obvious counterpoints that can be made. It will also help define your audience. Right now it feels like your audience is "all people who swear" but after your response to my comment it feels like "people who swear at all times with all company."

"Swearing rampantly" is not a clear definition of terms. You'll want to be very clear about these things. If you ever get the opportunity to take a logic course (or just an entry level philosophy course) I recommend it. It's largely helpful in writing essays of this nature.

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Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
:iconthe-mighty-kelp:
Thanks a lot for actually honestly critiquing the essay. At first I had thought you were just ranting, which is obviously not the case.

I didn't mention the point because:
A. I thought it was clear enough what audience I was trying to reach.
B. I hadn't thought that people who had swearing under control would actually take issue with this.
Anyways, you make a good point, and I think I'll add a sentence or two to clarify further my target audience.

According to Wiktionary, the definition of rampant is: "unrestrained or unchecked." This seems pretty clear to me.

I don't know you, you don't know me, but trust me, I don't need any logic or philosophy courses. I couldn't even begin to explain why. =P

Thank you for your input, you've been very helpful. I think I'll make the aforementioned changes and make sure that it's 100% clear before I re-upload it to my DA.

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:icontwister8138:
I think "rampant" is a problematic term because of the heated connotation it gives. In this type of essay, I think it's always best to maintain a cool voice. "Rampant" has a side of judgment to it that I think comes off as more reactionary and less calculated. I'd suggest using "unrestrained" or "unchecked" instead.

Anywho, sorry if my critique was unclear at first. Thanks for being so cool about it, though. Nothing worse than someone who refuses to improve something he or she has obviously already put a good deal of thought into.

The philosophy comment was mostly because Weston's Rulebook for Arguments totally whipped my writing (in all disciplines) into shape.

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Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
:iconthe-mighty-kelp:
Good point. I think I will change that word, then.
I also talked with my teacher a bit more and I'm gonna make a few minor changes. She agreed with me in that she thought the audience was clear enough, but if you were unsure, then I'm sure others could be unsure, so I'll probably change some wording to further clarify.

No problem. Thanks for the point of view and comments.

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:iconb1gfan:
:hug:for ya' my friend...just because you rock:D

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:icontwister8138:
Wow, here's my terribly late response... (I'm horrid at keeping up with dA these days.)

Thank you! :hug: back! Needed that.

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Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
:iconb1gfan:
Awww it's no problem :) :hug: back attcha' :)
:iconhibbard:
Thank you so much for all your generous feedback. I appreciate your interest in my art. You have a way with words.

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